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Ещё раз спасибо за труд. Даёшь Седьмой сезон!
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Читал запоем до той главы, где Дымок в городе в какой то штаб-квартире с аппаратурой. Как то по мне не воспринимается это. Ну а в целом очень интересно было в начале.Остров - это Добро и Зло, Белое и Черное, Свет и Дым.
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Ребята, огромное вам спасибо. Прочитал с огромным удовольствием (в целом). Неплохо подмечены и прописаны характеры персонажей (может, за исключением Хёрли). А теперь позволю себе пробежаться по некоторым отдельным моментам: 1) Попадание в 2004 год - неплохой ход, в целом себя оправдавший. 2) История Цезаря - пожалуй, перебор. Хотя и неплохо задумано. 3) Не вполне понятно зачем на острове Уидмор и компания (как-то на них действия совсем не хватило). 4) История Джульетт - красиво. 5) Альтернативная реальность. Сам выход на АР, на мой взгляд, получился лучше чем в сериале, а за "Доктора Хауса", 109 миллионов и эпизод с Джином отдельное спасибо. 6) Победа над Монстром - как-то неотчётливо. 7) Доктор Ченг - неожиданный ход, очень порадовало. Ещё раз спасибо за труд. Даёшь Седьмой сезон!
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